Sunday, October 14, 2012

Chapter. 8 part 2 Change of FUCKING Plans

So No Body is going to Comment on my posts????? -_______-

I see how it is, only Patty gets any play on here...





*inhales* You know, I'm the one fighting for ya'll to get updates sooner while Patty ass updates every 3 months!???
*exhales* You know I did a paper the night before and still turned right around and gave ya'll asses an update that was nice.
Patty gets all the damn comments and she don't even give that much action she waits on me to do it.
*inhales* I cant believe this shit.

-ILLFOLLOWUBAK

 

Friday, October 12, 2012

Chapter 8: Change of Plans



Recap: Amber told Brooke about this new guy she got head from but won’t tell Brooke who it is. Basically, Brooke and Amber have a girls night talking about boys mostly and Brook finally mentions Justin the guy she met at the airport. Amber talks Brooke into texting him and she finally does but he never replied so they fell asleep. Amber woke Brooke up because her phone kept going off. It was her grandma she wanted them to come by and help with planning Brooke’s sweet 16. They agreed to meet at 1pm. Finally Brooke got a text from Justin, he called her beautiful they set a date at Dylan’s candy bar on Friday at 7pm. (I don’t know why he said Friday when he could have just said today at 7, maybe he’s just cute that way). She was all happy but she’d forgotten she had to meet her grandma at 1 so her and Amber took off.
 “Yeah…..Oh shoot what time are we supposed to be at your house?”
“What time is it?”
“Its 12:50!”
“Oh shit we gotta go!”

Saturday, October 6, 2012

Making The First Move part2



 Recap:  TEXT: Hey this is Brooke, you might not remember who I am but we met at the airport and you gave me your number. After pressing send I showed Ms. Nosy the text. "That's good now just wait til he text back. The ball is now in his court you have nothing to worry about because you promised to text and you did soooo lets finish our movie" Amber was right I was now relived but yet a little nervous because what if don't text back? Okay I'm not gone stress over this imma just enjoy this time with my best friend and chill.
 *Ok now here we go*

Friday, October 5, 2012

Meet the Misplaced

Brooke
Brooke's mom

Grandma and Papi

Joshua
Amber

Levi



Justin

 As we introduce new people in the story we will add a photo  






Thursday, August 30, 2012

Making The First Move

Before I start I wanna say I am so sorry for leaving y'all hanging I've been super busy and I had no time to update but now that I have a little more time on my hands I can commit back to Misplaced. This post will be divided in to two parts, Part2 will be coming soon! I hope you enjoy in post ! Lets GO!

Recap: Ch. 6 Part 2: Giiiirl Let Me Tell You (Amber is talking) "Yea, so I hopped up so fast to grab my shirt and shorts so I could see where he was going but my clumsy ass was falling all over the place trying to get them damn shorts back on. My damn legs were weak as fuck too for some reason, I just didn't have the strength to be moving that fast. But, by the time I got to the door he was gone. I couldn't believe he had just did me like that and left. I was a little pissed but at the same time I couldn't be so I just put One Love back on and hit repeat and sat there on the bed thinking with the biggest and dumbest smile on my face. Like, he really likes me like that? Wow..." 
,





   Wow was all I could say. Now I just needed to know who this mystery guy was.
  
    "Sooooo.... Amber who was that? Whats his name? Where did you meet him? How old is he?"
       I didnt give her anytime at all to answer my questions
    "Dang Brooke! whats up with all the questions?" 
      "And I'm still waiting!"
    She looked at me for a long time and just as she was about to speak, Her phone rung.
    "Hold that thought" she said as she answered her phone


                                   
(Amber)
                                                PHONE CONVO
                   "Hello"
                    "What you doing?"
                    "I'm talking to my Best Friend at the moment"
                    "Brooke right? Tell her I said hello" he said with a chuckle
                    "You know that! and whats so damn funny?"
                    "You! and you still haven't told her about us huh?" 
                    "What about me? and No not yet"
                     "And why not Amber?"
                     "Because I still don't know what this is yet"
                    "Amber why are you playing games with me like you don't know. I guess I'll have to show you better than I can tell you, Cause I see you like playing hard to get"
                   "Not at all my love"
                   Seeee you calling me love but you dont know what this is? SMH"
                   "Can we talk about this later?"
                    "You dont wanna talk to me anymore?" He said in a baby voice
                   "Now you know I do but I have company and its rude to be on the phone" I said trying to get him off the phone before I slip and say his name and the way Brooke was looking at me she was just waiting for me to slip up. 
                   "Okay you're right, One Love"
                    "Talk to you later" 





"Who was that?!?" Brooke said giving me no time to gather my thoughts 

"Dang you all up in mine!" was all I could come with at that moment 
 "Well DUH! So tell me! 
" No I can't!' I yelled 
  "Why not? I'm your best friend"
 Man I knew she was going to pull the "BEST FRIEND" card out DAMN! I  wanted so bad to tell her who he was but I know its to soon tell anyone even her. 
   "I know but when the time is right I will tell you I promise you will be the first to know" I said hoping that she will believe and let it go but knowing Brooke she won't. 

(Brooke)
  

It hurt me to know that Amber was keeping something from me but I had to respect her wishes and wait. Something I hate doing! 
 "Okay Ambee I guess I can wait even tho I wanna know NOW!" 
  "Thank you for understanding cause I know how much its killing you in the inside that you have to wait" she said then busting out laughing 
   "Shut up! I cant stand you!" I said starting to laugh with her only because she knew so well 
   "Okay I'm done, So are you spending the night?"
   "Yeah I am I just have to call my grandma and let her know"
   "Okay well you do that while I go and get us snacks and something to drink"
   "Alright" After Amber went out the room I called my grandma. She didn't even give me a to say anything she just said "Yes Brooke you can spend the night I'll see you in the morning Love you" and hung up in my face. How rude? but I still love her. 
   "So what she say?" Amber said walking back in the room with her hands full of junk 
    "She said yes its cool"
    "Cool"
     "So we about to do?" I asked knowing that Amber had something up her sleeve
    "I just really wanna stay in and watch movies and talk like old times nothing major."
   Okay this was totally new to me because Amber always talking about "Let go party" Something is new about her and I'm going to find out.
    "Whaaatt No parties?"
     "Nope. Just me and you tonight" she said walking over to her movie wall. "What movie?"
     "I don't care you can pick the first movie"
    "Okay, How about Friends With Benefits?"
    "Yes I love that movie"
  As we started watching the movie I realized that I never text or called the guy I met at the air port. I started to smile without knowing I was and when I thought Amber was not paying attention to me I looked over and she was staring dare at me. DANG I was caught.
    "Why the hell you smiling so hard?"
 I busted out laughing "Nothing, just watch the damn movie and stop looking at me." I said trying to keep her from asking me anymore questions. Next thing I know Amber got up and turned the TV off.
    "Why did you do that? I was watching that!" 
    "Was watching that now you're NOT now TALK!"
    "What are you talking about?" trying to act like I dont know 
    "Brooke Michell if you dont tell me why you're smiling and turning all red"
   I didn't even know I was blushing just thinking about him OMG now I have to tell her.
      "Okayyy I'll tell you sit down gosh"
      *taking a seat* "Go ahead I'm listening"
      "Well.... there's this guy ...."
       "OMG YOU HAVE A BOYFRIEND AND YOU DIDN'T TELL ME? WHAT KIND OF BEST FRIEND ARE YOU?" 
        "DAMN can I tell finish?" I said while laughing at her at 
        "I'm sorry I went over board go ahead with the story"
        "Anyway his name is Justin and we met at the air port"
         "Is he cute?" 
          "Beyond!" I could help but smile
         "Sooo did you get his number?
          "I did but I have yet to call or text him"
          "And why not?"
           "Because I haven't gotten the chance to that's why"
          "What's stopping you right now?"
         "Nothing bu.."
         "But nothing! call him! NOW!"
       What was I going to say to him? I was turning even more red then before. I was nervous and didn't know what to expect because I was never the who made the first move. So I took a deep breath and picked up my phone then scrolled down my contact until I got to his name, I was about to press call but I was stopped by a incoming call. I was kind of happy but by the look on Amber's face I knew I wasn't off the hook.
       




                                                      PHONE CONVO
                                 
                            "Yes" I answered my phone 
                            "Brooke? Where are you?" he said with the softest voice ever
                            "Joshua I'm at Amber's house what is it?"
                           "When are you coming back?"
                            "In the morning why whats wrong?"
                        (I wish they get off the phone already damn! lol anyway back to the story) 
                            "Nothing I just wanted to know where you was"
                           "Okay well if that's all you wanted I Love you and will see you later."
                           "Love you Bye"
                     I knew Joshua wanted me to come home but I was not about to get up and drive home even tho I'm not that far I just didnt feel like it. Now that I was off the phone I was trying to think of a way of getting out of calling Justin. I had some time to think because Amber was in the bathroom. Well I thought I had time when I turned back around she was coming out and sat right next to me.
                        


                        "Joshua?" she asked 
                        "Yes, he wanted to know if I was coming home"
                        "Are you leaving?" she asked as if she knew I was going to say yeah
                         "No Imma sta--"
                         "GREAT! Now back to this guy Justin" 
                         "You are really going to make me do this huh?" I said already knowing the answer 
                        "What is so bad about making the first move?"
                       I didn't say anything back because I knew I wouldn't win this one.
                        "My point exactly! you have nothing to say" she said with a little chuckle. "Answer this Brooke did you give him you number?"
                        "No I did not" I said a little over a whisper
                        "Okay so since you DIDN'T give him your number and you got his was a sign that you ready to make the first move"
                     I understood what point she was trying to make but the way she said it didnt make any sense I just said "Okay "
                      "Just call him already! gosh!"
                      "Ugh okay! I'll text him how about that?"
                      "Do you little gee" 
                   I couldn't help but laugh. After laughing at Amber I picked up my phone and once again scrolled down my contact until I got to Justin name then I sent a simple text.
              TEXT: Hey this is Brooke, you might not remember who I am but we met at the air port and you gave me your number. After pressing send I showed Ms. Nosy the text. 
                      "That's good now just wait til he text back. The ball is now in his court you have nothing to worry about because you promised to text and you did soooo lets finish our movie" 
                     Amber was right I was now relived but yet a little nervous because what if don't text back? Okay I'm not gone stress over this imma just enjoy this time with my best friend and chill. 
           

Please comment ! and let me know what you think. And once again I'm sorry about wait Part two will be up soon. and imma start trying to make these updates longer cause I know some of you be like my post are too short But I thank y'all for reading -@PattyBey_Tweetn
        
                          
     
        
    

Friday, June 22, 2012

Ch. 6 Part 2: Giiiirl Let Me Tell You

Recap: (Ch. 6 Part 1: I Got Mad Wheels)  Everyone was laughing and maybe for different reasons, but it didn't matter. We were all happy and this felt normal. Like here, I had a normal life and a normal family. The sound of laughter was something I barely heard at my mom's house. To me laughter filling the rooms and bouncing off the walls turned an regular old house into a home.
     Snapping me out of my thought process, Amber grabbed my shoulder and said, "Aye, when are we gonna go to my house so I can tell you everything?"



Saturday, June 16, 2012

Ch. 6: I Got Mad Wheels

Recap: Ch. 5 (Home Sweet Home)

Then my grandpa came back down the staris with three big bags in one hand and a small black box in the other. HE handed the box and one of three bags to me then the other bags to Joshua.  When I opened the box it was a key in it. I started jumping up and down because I just knew it was a new car! 
     "Come with me" papi said walking toward the back door.
    When I got to the door all I could say is OMG!

Sunday, June 10, 2012

Home Sweet Home

     Recap:Ch 4        It was slightly amazing and scary how close the lightening was. Then suddenly the plane began to shake so I just held on to Joshua tighter and..... there was a big BOOM! the plane was shaking harder and the thunder and lightening seemed to be using the plane for target practice. 
       Then next thing I know PLACKOW!!!   


Tuesday, June 5, 2012

Ch. 4 Air Scare

Recap: Ch. 3 (Hatred)


  
"What do you want Joshua?"
      "I just came to check on you"
     "I am okay"
     "Are you sure?" he said looking at me knowing I was lying 
     "Yes Joshua I'll be fine I just wanna be alone right now."
     "Okay" he said walking away with his head down 
I closed my door and went to lay down. Thinking I had to call my grandma more so now because I can't stay here any longer.





Monday, June 4, 2012

UPDATE!

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Tuesday, May 29, 2012

Ch.3 Hatered

Recap: Ch.2 (Where'd you Go?)

But I could feel my blood boiling,


*beep...beep*
*beep...beep*



And then it all went black...
     "Brooke?!"



Wednesday, May 23, 2012

Ch.2: Where'd You Go

Recap: (Ch. 1: I Promise)

We were about 20 minutes away from being home and we, well I, was jamming to "Party" and the whole time Joshua was laughing at me singing off key. "If Beyonce heard you singing her song like that she would sue you."
     "Shut up punk! I can sing," I said while laughing.
     "Yea, If you say so..."
     I was about to make a left turn and out of no where...
"BOOM!"

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     "Fuck you bitch!"
     "No fuck you! All you care about is your fucking drugs Josh! You don't even care about your own children!"
     "That's not my fucking daughter! Shit with a whore as a wife that may not be my son!"

     That was the first time I heard my mom and Josh really argue. I was locked in my room, only 12-years-old holding on tight to my 3-year-old brother as I sat Indian style, rocking, with him on my lap. I didn't understand why my mother was accusing the man I saw as my only father figure of doing drugs; and, I definitely didn't know what type of drugs they were. 
     But soon enough, after hundreds of fights which were once before about my mom wanting Josh to stop using then later turning into who snorted the most coke up their nose and who's next check would pay for more, I grew to hate the man my baby brother called "daddy" and my mom married and got strung out on cocaine with. 
     Hell, after so many years and all the times I had heard him not claim me and make me feel like I didn't belong in their "happy little family," the more I grew to loath even the sound of his damn voice. And the more I listened to him beat on my mother because they had run out if drugs the more I really knew that I actually didn't belong in their family.
     I knew my brother and I just didn't deserve this much dysfunction. Every since then, I vowed to ALWAYS protect my brother and somehow I would figure out how to get us out of their family. Even if it's just me and him, that's all I need for it to be a real happy family. Me and my brother..."MY BROTHER!!!"
     "Mam, are you ok? Mam, can you hear me? What's your name?"
     "My brother! Where's my brother?!?!" I could feel my head pounding and I just couldn't seem to control the warmness running down my face. I didn't know if all of it was just my tears or if the pounding side of my head was pouring blood down my face, but I didn't care. For now, forget about the pounding, forget the stinging feeling all over my face and hands. I just needed to find my baby brother.
     "Mam, we need you to calm down and stay still..."
     "But where is my brother!?"
     "Ma...m"
     "No! Stop calling me mam! I'm 16, my name is Brooke Michelle and I want to know where my little brother is now! His name is Joshua Grey!"
     "He is on his way to the hospital, just calm down. We will take you as soon as a paramedic gets you patched up."
     "Oh no! What have I done??? God please. God please. God please let him be ok. Please. Please. Please."
     As the paramedic checked me for any other possible wounds I just sat there slightly rocking the way I did with Joshua back in my room with warm salty tears that burned the small scratches and scrapes on my face tumbling slowly down the blank slate once known as my face. All I could do was mumble what was to me the only version of a prayer that I could utter, "God please...God please." 
     "Brooke??? Do you want to go to the hospital?"
     "Yes! I have to see my brother!"
     "No, you. Do you want to see a doctor?"
     "I just want to check on my brother. Then I can check on me."
The officer and the paramedic agreed that I was in a good enough condition, physically to go see him. Even if they didn't agree, I think they knew that they wouldn't be able to stop me from seeing him.
     As we walked up to the clerk's desk at the hospital, I informed them of my name, my brother's name, and for what use, I don't know, I gave them my mom's name and number.
     The doctor came up to me and informed me that My little brother was in the ICU and that he was stable.
     "He has a few bumps and bruises here and there but for the most part he seems to be doing fine. He's heavily sedated due to the medicine that will help ease the pain because he has a broken rib. So, he probably won't be awake for a couple more hours or so."
     I looked into this man's eyes as if he was the savior of my soul. I just needed him to tell me good news and that it wasn't as bad as I expected because I just couldn't handle the thought of something being wrong with my brother, and I was the cause of it.
     The doctor led me over to the window that framed the the saddest view of my baby brother hooked up to tubes and cords.
     The tears began to fall as I slowly walked into the empty hospital room of a 7-year-old little boy with no mother or father standing by his bedside, hopelessly waiting for their child to regain conscientiousness. It was just me alone with my brother, listening to the subtle yet so reassuring "beep beep" of his heart on the monitor. So, I pulled up a chair and I let the tears flow from my eyes as I held his little, barely warm hand.
     All that I could think of was my mother getting high with Josh while we were sitting here alone and in pain. I wanted to call my grandma back in New York so bad, but something inside of me was happy still. Everyone would finally know the truth behind "our happy little family"  and my life with my brother could begin. I didn't know where we would go besides back to New York, but I didn't care. 
     Maybe then I could go somewhere without having to think that my brother might be getting beat, yelled at, or worse; he gets into the drugs that my mom leaves in the urn that used to be filled with Josh's grandfather's ashes until she decided to make that her hiding spot because Josh just always talks to to it, never even touching it. No one else is supposed to touch it either, but hey, someone's got to "clean it." But, she keeps the real ashes tucked away in an old Oxy-clean  bucket in the cleaning close; so, she can put them back when the urn is "low or empty."
     After sitting with my brother for three hours he finally opened his eyes only to tell me that he loved me for always being there and that he was still really sleepy; so, I told him he could go back to sleep and I would still be here. Finally, after two more hours passed with me in the same spot holding on to my brother's hand, in walks my mother.
     With her hair in a loose bun with sections of hair flowing around her face and neck, she repeatedly sniffed and rubbed her nose, "So is he okay Brooke?"
     Looking down, trying really hard not to feel hatred towards the woman that gave birth to me, I mumbled, "Yes, but he has a broken rib."
     "Oh that's good," she said with a slight smile and started a quick motion towards the door to leave.
     I quickly stood up to confront her for even having the thought, "All you ca say is 'that's good'? Your children, you hear that multiple!? Your CHILDREN were in a car crash and you don't care enough to ask about both of us, let alone tell us you love us and embrace us as a normal mother would? As the woman I knew as MY mother would?"
     "I am your mother! I just..."
     "You're high mom. How can you care when you're high?" With tears beginning to roll down my cheeks I said, " 'how can you you care when you're high Josh!?' Remember those arguments? Now you're on the other side and I'm you this time. Mom, why can't you stop? Why won't you care?"
    My heart was pounding and my brain was racing. I kept starring at her trying to see the picture perfect woman that I used to know as my mother, "my mommy," but I couldn't see her. My vision was getting blurry and more tears fell as I focused in on the "beep beep" of my brother's heart on the monitor as he slept through it all. My legs felt weak and so did everything else. 
     I did'nt know why I felt like this,

*beep...beep* 

and I surely dont know where I got the courage

*beep...beep*

 to express my love and hate for my mother to my mother.

*beep...beep*


But I could feel my blood boiling,


*beep...beep*
*beep...beep*



And then it all went black...
     "Brooke?!"








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Tuesday, May 22, 2012

Ch. 1: I Promise

     I never thought I would be here. Here goes nothing. "Can I talk to you?"
     "Sure." (tells her team to excuse her)
     "Hi my name is Brooke Michelle and I am 16-years-old. I live in Washington with my mom and my 7-year-old brother Joshua. Oh yea, and my mom's husband Josh. I don't like him so much but I'll get to that later."

*Brooke hears screams*

     "Ugh! There they go again." Then I hear a little knock at my bedroom door so I get up to answer my door. "Yes?"
     "It's me, Joshua. Can I come in here with you sister?"
I hate when he looks so sad, "Come on boo." He goes straight to my bed and I close and join him. We just lay and stare up at the ceiling. 
     Then Joshua turned over and asked me, "Sister? Why don't you like my daddy?"
I was taken back by that question. I didn't know if i wanted to tell him the truth or just play it off. But I couldn't lie to him. So, I took a deep breath and just when i was about to speak,
     "WAM!!!" my mom busted into my room and started yelling at me and my brother, "Get ya'll lazy asses up and go clean up my house!"I really hate when she gets high. She is such a bitch! 
     At first me and my brother didn't move until Josh came in. "You all heard what she said. Get up and get the shit done!"
     If only looks could kill. I rolled my eyes and grabbed Joshua's hand and when I was walking out of the door my mom hit me in the back of my head and said, "Roll ya eyes again." If she wasn't my mother I would have slapped her and told her to never put her hands on me again! But, I just continued to walk. 
    Still holding Joshua's hand, I looked around to see where the mess was only to see Joshua's papers or what ever he was doing. 
     "Now Joshua why didn't you pick up your stuff?"
     "Because, I was sitting down drawing before my dad came home and him and mom started arguing and that's when I got up and came to your room because I didn't want to hear them."
     I understood what he was saying, that's exactly why I stay in my room all the time. "Well, Joshie pick up your stuff. Are you hungry?"
     "Yes!"
     "Ok, well clean your mess up and we will leave to get us something to eat."
     I went back to my room to get my keys. Then I went to knock on my mom's room door, only to get no answer; so, I knew what they were doing. I just rolled my eyes and walked away from the door.
     "Joshua are you ready? Come on." 
     We got in the car and Joshua asks, "Brooke do we have to listen to Beyonce? Can we listen to something else?"
     "I started to laugh, "No we don't but on the way back I'm putting her back on." So I put my Watch The Throne CD in Joshua started laughing, so I asked, "What's so funny sucka?"
     "Cause, I asked can we play something else besides Beyonce, and you play her husband" he says while still shaking his head and laughing. I didn't get his point, so I just left it alone and pulled off. We ended up going to this dinner not too far from our house. We decided we were going to eat in, so we sat down and ordered our food. 
     As we were eating I noticed that something was wrong with Joshua. He had something on his mind. "Joshua, what's the matter?"
     "Nothing."
     "Don't lie to me. You know you can tell me anything. I am your sister and you can always talk to me."
     He took a deep breath, "Brooke I don't want you to leave this Summer because I just feel so alone and I have no one to talk to. You know how mom is, all she do is stay in the room then she comes out yelling about something I didn't do."
     "Has she ever hit you?"
     He puts his head down.
     "Joshua! Has she ever hit you while I was gone? Answer me."
     He looked up with tears in his eyes, "Yes. You remember last Summer when I told you I broke my finger playing basketball?"
     "Yes, I remember."
     "Well, I lied. Mom did it and she told me to tell who ever asked that I was playing basketball."
     That's when I started to get upset because I didn't know my mom was putting my baby brother that much pain. "I'm so sorry Joshie. I didn't know. I will never leave you again, I promise."
     I got up to hug him and we hugged for so long that Joshua finally said, "Ok sister, dang can we go now?"
     It was kind of funny because I didn't feel like we were actually hugging that long. But, I love him so much. I would never let anything bad happen to him as long as I was around. "Ok, let's go"
     We got in the car but before I pulled off I had to put my Beyonce back in and Joshua just shook his head and started laughing. "What's funny?"
     "You! Can you go a day without listening to her?"
     "You are such a hater I swear," I said while giggling at my littler brother trying to make fun of me.
     "No I am not. I like Beyonce, but I'm not crazy over her like you. Aye what ya'll call ya'llselves? Beyturoge?"
     "Really Joshua? Don't get beat up, and it's BEYHIVE and don't you forget it," I replied while laughing but very serious.
      "Well EX-cuse me," he said jokingly.
     "Now, let's go." I pulled off.
     We were about 20 minutes away from being home and we, well I, was jamming to "Party" and the whole time Joshua was laughing at me singing off key. "If Beyonce heard you singing her song like that she would sue you."
     "Shut up punk! I can sing," I said while laughing.
     "Yea, If you say so..."
     I was about to make a left turn and out of no where...
"BOOM!"




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